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The worst experience which I cannot forget is when I hit by a baseball when I was young. It was very hurt.

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Hi Alex! 

Oh, dear. That must've hurt a lot. I hope it doesn't happen again. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon. 

The worst experience which I cannot forget is when I hit by a baseball when I was young. 
>>The worst experience that I cannot forget is when I got hit by a baseball when I was young. 

It was very hurt.
>> I was very hurt during that time. 
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