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about discussions with other people

작성자: 윤*영
2022-04-27 255

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It is stressful to have discussions with other people who have different opinions. I am not rational but emotional, so I think I am relatively poor at speaking logically. It means that I should put too much energy to think about reasons. For example, when I am asked to answer the question "do you think three or more siblings are better for your life or just one child is good?", I will answer three or more siblings are better. After answering that question, the person will ask again like "WHY?". The word 'WHY' suffocates me. The reason why I choose it is that I feel better with my sisters. It means that there is no logical reason. I just like it. What reasons do I need for what I like it? However, whenever I discuss with other people, everyone wants to listen the logical reasons. I wish they just admit my feeling. For this reason, I like talking with people who can have a pleasant conversation with my common interests.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Sophia, I can see your hard work in this writing task. Your argument is very clear. Your arguments did a great job supporting your ideas. I always appreciate your hard work.~ T. Lyn
It is stressful to have discussions with other people who have different opinions.
>>Correct. Discussing with people of different opinions is stressful.
I am not rational but emotional, so I think I am relatively poor at speaking logically.
>>Correct.
It means that I should put too much energy to think about reasons.
>>It means that I have to spend a lot of energy thinking about the reasons.
For example, when I am asked to answer the question "do you think three or more siblings are better for your life or just one child is good?", I will answer three or more siblings are better.
>>For example, when answering the question, "Which do you think is better: three or more siblings or just one child?" Then, I will answer three or more siblings is better.
After answering that question, the person will ask again like "WHY?".
>>After answering the question, the person will ask again, "Why?"
The word 'WHY' suffocates me.
>>Correct. The word 'WHY' takes my breath away.
The reason why I choose it is that I feel better with my sisters.
>>The reason I chose it, is because it makes me feel better when I am with my sisters.
It means that there is no logical reason.
>>Correct.
I just like it.
>>Correct.
What reasons do I need for what I like it?
>>Do I really have to give reasons for everything I like?
However, whenever I discuss with other people, everyone wants to listen the logical reasons.
>>But whenever I discuss with others, everyone wants to hear the logical reasons.
I wish they just admit my feeling.
>>I want them to acknowledge my feelings.
For this reason, I like talking with people who can have a pleasant conversation with my common interests.
>>For this reason, I like talking to people with who I can have pleasant conversations about common interests.
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