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Writing Task(Apr 26th, 2022)

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What is your greatest fear?
I have the only one fear. it's the fear of death. If I die, I will never exit. Actually, I have no fear of my death. The only concern about my death is the fact that my wife and my daughter would have to live without me, always missing my existence in the past.

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Hi, U Seung! 

Indeed! You are right. I think almost all the people in the world fears death. Especially, if there are still a lot of things we haven't done during the time we are alive.

Thank you for sharing!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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I have the only one fear. it's the fear of death. 
>> Correct! 
it's the fear of death. 
>> It's the fear of death. 
If I die, I will never exit. 
>> If I die, I can never exist. 
Actually, I have no fear of my death. 
>> Correct! 
The only concern about my death is the fact that my wife and my daughter would have to live without me, always missing my existence in the past.
>> Correct! 
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