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First, I like to relate to computers. So, If l learn to make programming for computer, I can make the programming. Second, I was good at soccer. If my leg wasn't broken, I could be a soccer player. Third, I played go when I went to elementary school. At the moment, I participated in the Go competition. If I had played Go so far, I might have become a Go driver.

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Hello there Jay!
Thank you for sharing your thought through writing. DId you know that writing is one of the best way to express yourself without being interrupted by another person. Enjoy learning!
T. Aki~
First, I like to relate to computers. 
>>> CORRECT!
So, If l learn to make programming for computer, I can make the programming.
>>>  So, If l learn how to make programming for computer, I can do programming.
Second, I was good at soccer. If my leg wasn't broken, I could be a soccer player. 
>>> CORRECT!
Third, I played Go when I went to elementary school. 
>>> CORRECT!
At the moment, I participated in the Go competition.
>>> CORRECT!
If I had played Go so far, I might have become a Go driver.
>>> CORRECT!
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