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What kind of sport do you want to try?

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I like dogs. So I want to try sports to play with a dog.
There is a dog sports called as "agility".
Dog agility is a sports to make a dog run along with a complicated course.
It's competitive game who is faster.
So it needs huge training with a dog.

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Hi there, Kevin!

This is a very interesting sport and a very new one for me. I knew of frisbee where the dog fetches a circular piece op thing and this needs agility as well. Well, tell me more about it in class.

Your sentences here below are very good! So, thank you for the time and effort in always submitting quality work.

See you!

-T. Donna =)

I like dogs. So I want to try sports to play with a dog.
>> I like dogs so I want to try to play a sport playing with a dog.

There is a dog sports called as "agility".
>> Correct!

Dog agility is a sports to make a dog run along with a complicated course.
>> Correct!

It's competitive game who is faster.
>> It's a competitive game who is faster.

So it needs huge training with a dog.
>> Correct!
Or: So it needs a huge training with a dog.
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