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3rd assignment

작성자: 윤*영
2022-04-22 186

회원님의 영작문

It is communication to make your marriage life become happy. The reason is that conflicts are essential in relationship. Thus, we should focus on knowing how to solve them rather than how to avoid disturbing conflicts. The effective way to communicate well is putting yourself in other's shoes. It is difficult to understand the other person's thoughts but we should recognize we have lived different lives. For example, my boyfriend and I have extremely different personality. I think we are in the opposite side. However, when we face troubles, we just try to understand each other's personality and the way we think. It is really helpful to loose the temper. In fact, we sometimes misunderstand 'love'. People may think love always bring happiness and joy. However, I am sure that true love means no matter how hard it is, not giving up the person but protecting him. Thus, the marriage should be based on the true love taking care of each other within any conditions.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Sophia! Love is something that everybody wants. It is something everyone wants to feel and have felt towards them! Stay in love and enjoy your weekend. ~ T.Lyn
It is communication to make your marriage life become happy.
>>Communication is the key to a happy marriage.
The reason is that conflicts are essential in relationship.
>>The reason is that conflict is essential in a relationship.
Thus, we should focus on knowing how to solve them rather than how to avoid disturbing conflicts.
>>Correct. 
The effective way to communicate well is putting yourself in other's shoes.
>>An effective way to communicate well is by putting yourself in others' shoes.
It is difficult to understand the other person's thoughts but we should recognize we have lived different lives.
>>It's hard to understand what other people think, but we have to admit that we've had different lives.
For example, my boyfriend and I have extremely different personality.
>>For example, my boyfriend and I have extremely different personalities.
I think we are in the opposite side.
>>I think we are really opposite.
However, when we face troubles, we just try to understand each other's personality and the way we think.
>>But when difficulties arise, we just try to understand each other's personalities and thoughts.
It is really helpful to loose the temper.
>>Losing your temper really helps.
In fact, we sometimes misunderstand 'love'.
>>Correct.
People may think love always bring happiness and joy.
>>People may think that love always brings happiness and joy.
However, I am sure that true love means no matter how hard it is, not giving up the person but protecting him.
>>However, I am convinced that true love does not give up on that person but protects him no matter how difficult it is.
Thus, the marriage should be based on the true love taking care of each other within any conditions.
>>Therefore, marriage should be based on genuine love, caring for each other in all circumstances.
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