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What do you think should we do before job interviews?

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What do you think should we do before job interviews?

I prepare for the interview question and practice them.
When I prepare my answer I will not have to fumble during the interview.
I am trying to speak clearly and have a good attitude.
Also, I have to make sure my dress appropriately for a job interview.
It is important to have a first impression. I keep my simle and make eye contact.

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Hi Monica! 

We need to be in a good state before going on a job interview. :) Your suggestions were good. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon. 

I prepare for the interview question and practice them.
>> I will prepare for the interview question and practice them.

When I prepare my answer I will not have to fumble during the interview.
>> When I prepare my answers, I will not have to fumble during the interview.

I am trying to speak clearly and have a good attitude.
>> I will try to speak clearly and have a good attitude.

Also, I have to make sure my dress appropriately for a job interview.
>> Also, I have to make sure that I dress appropriately for the job interview.

It is important to have a first impression. I keep my simle and make eye contact.
>> It is important to have a good first impression. I will keep myself simple and make eye contacts. 


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