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What song would you like to dedicate to your parents and why?

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The song I want to dedicate to my parents is Parents' Day. It's because the Parents' day is around the corner in May 8th. And we give carnations to our parents on that day in South Korea.

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Hi Elic! 

Who was the singer of this song? I would like to listen to it. :) That's a very thoughtful celebration by the way. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon. 

The song I want to dedicate to my parents is Parents' Day.
>> The song I want to dedicate to my parents is called "Parents' Day". 

It's because the Parents' day is around the corner in May 8th. 
>> It's because Parents' day is around the corner; in May 8th. 

And we give carnations to our parents on that day in South Korea.
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