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I had difficulty expressing myself while I had a job interview on the phone in English. At that time, I had prepared the interview in Korean because I applied for the Korean company only. However, last month, I got a chance to take a job interview in Axxxxxx Korea where the HR team has worked in Singapore. I did not expect that the HR team directly called me in English. It was the most embarrassed situation I had ever experienced in job interview.

The most embarrassing thing is that I cannot use my body language. If the interviewer saw my body languages, it would be more effective to convey the meaning. In this experience, I learned the importance of body language during conversations. The suitable body motions can be an effective tool for communicating each other.

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Hello Sophia. Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with you! We have a hard time expressing ourselves, especially if our interlocutors cannot see us. Using body language is also good for communication. ~T. Lyn

I had difficulty expressing myself while I had a job interview on the phone in English. 

>>Correct. I was having an interview over the phone in English and I had a hard time expressing myself.

At that time, I had prepared the interview in Korean because I applied for the Korean company only.

>>Correct. At that time, I prepared for the interview in Korean since I only applied for a Korean company.

However, last month, I got a chance to take a job interview in Axxxxxx Korea where the HR team has worked in Singapore.

>>Correct. But last month, I had an opportunity to take a job interview at Axxxxxx Korea, where the HR team worked in Singapore.

I did not expect that the HR team directly called me in English. 

>>I didn't know that the HR team would call in English directly.

It was the most embarrassed situation I had ever experienced in job interview.
>>It was the most embarrassing situation I've ever experienced in a job interview.
The most embarrassing thing is that I cannot use my body language. 

>>Correct. The most embarrassing thing is not being able to use body language.

If the interviewer saw my body languages, it would be more effective to convey the meaning. 

>>If the interviewer had seen my body language, I would have been able to convey the meaning more effectively.

In this experience, I learned the importance of body language during conversations. 

>>Correct. This experience taught me the importance of body language during conversations.

The suitable body motions can be an effective tool for communicating each other.

>>Proper body movement can be an effective tool for communicating with each other.

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