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My city doesn\'t have bookstore

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I sometimes go to bookstore because I want to buy workbooks for school exam.
But the place which I live in don't have bookstores, so I have to go to Seoul by bus or taxi.
In addition, traffic is not good in my place because this city is recentlly built.
It takes more than thirty minutes by bus.
I hope traffic gets better
But now, it's difficult to go to bookstore and to buy workbooks.
I felt in here, 'Traffic is really important'

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Hi Hanna,
We need to understand that bookstores are not just a place to sell a product. Bookstores are one of the most important elements of any high street. Bookstores places that nurture learning and discussion, champion diverse voices and ideas, celebrate language, treasure knowledge, and connect the past with our chaotic present to show us how we might go forward are more needed than ever. ~ Teacher QUENNY
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I sometimes go to bookstore because I want to buy workbooks for school exam.
>> I sometimes go to the bookstore because I want to buy workbooks for a school exams.
But the place which I live in don't have bookstores, so I have to go to Seoul by bus or taxi.
>> But the place which I live in doesn't have bookstores, so I have to go to Seoul by bus or taxi.
In addition, traffic is not good in my place because this city is recentlly built.
>> In addition, traffic is not good in my place because this city is recently built.
It takes more than thirty minutes by bus.
>> It takes more than thirty minutes by bus.(CORRECT)
I hope traffic gets better But now, it's difficult to go to bookstore and to buy workbooks.
>> I hope traffic gets better. But now, it's difficult to go to the bookstore and buy workbooks.
I felt in here, 'Traffic is really important
>> I felt in here, 'Traffic is really important.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I sometimes go to bookstore because I want to buy workbooks for school exam.
But the place which I live in don't have bookstores, so I have to go to Seoul by bus or taxi.
In addition, traffic is not good in my place because this city is recentlly built.
It takes more than thirty minutes by bus.
I hope traffic gets better
But now, it's difficult to go to bookstore and to buy workbooks.
I felt in here, 'Traffic is really important'
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