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What is the best memory you have of your family doing something together? Explain in detail.

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The best memory that I have of my family doing something together is traveling Canada with my family.
Canada was very cool and I went there with my family, so it was really memorable.
And also it is the only memory that I have of my family traveling other countries, so it was very meaningful.
Because of these reasons, the best memory that I have of my family doing something together is traveling Canada with my family.

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Hi John 

Yes, traveling is always a fun way to bond with your family. I hope that you guys can make more memories together. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon. 

The best memory that I have of my family doing something together is traveling Canada with my family.
>> The best memory that I have of my family is traveling to Canada. 

Canada was very cool and I went there with my family, so it was really memorable.
>> Going there was a fun experience. 

And also it is the only memory that I have of my family traveling other countries, so it was very meaningful.
>> And it is also the only memory that I have of me and my family traveling so it is very meaningful. 

Because of these reasons, the best memory that I have of my family doing something together is traveling Canada with my family
>> .Because of these reasons, the best memory that I have with my family was when we went to Canada. 

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