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I want to bulid a pretty kennel if I have a dog.
I think Iguana is little bit creepy.
Some parrot can imitat people.
I want to have a pet someday.
Animals want to live in the wild.

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Hi Alex! 

Animals are fun to be around. You can gain a lot of experiences with them. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon. 

I want to bulid a pretty kennel if I have a dog.
>> I want to build a pretty kennel if I have a dog.

I think Iguana is little bit creepy.
>> I think iguana's are a little bit creepy. 

Some parrot can imitat people.
>> Some parrots intimidate people. 

I want to have a pet someday.
>> CORRECT

Animals want to live in the wild.
>> CORRECT

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