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When I was fifteen, my family had a first time to travel abroad. The tour place was Shanghai, so I suffered from a smell of spice which made me feel bloated, but it¡¯s a delightful memory in there.

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Hi there, Judy!

I never thought that you have spice allergy. Sometimes, memories like this make you enjoy your travel because you experience so many things apart from what you have done in your own country. 

I wonder what other fun things you did in Shanghai... Anyway, tell me more about it when I see you in class!

Thanks for this very good homework answer!

Catch you soon.

-T. Donna =)

When I was fifteen, my family had a first time to travel abroad. 
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The tour place was Shanghai, so I suffered from a smell of spice which made me feel bloated, but it¡¯s a delightful memory in there.
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