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What makes you angry?

Basically i angry only about for work.
My colleague(team member) can't refuse the other team's request. because of his character
So i often said to him
Don't accept every time and focus on our project

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Good evening, Bob!

Hi, dear. Thank you so much for sending me your composition. I appreciate your effort every time you make sentences and every time you answer the questions. I totally understand why you feel annoyed with your team members. Sometimes it's hard to say no to others, but we also need to consider our team before granting others' requests. Maybe your colleague doesn't know how to refuse, or he's shy to say no. I hope you can help him to focus on his tasks. ^^

~T.Erin

Basically i angry only about for work.
>>Basically, I only get angry when it is about work.

My colleague(team member) can't refuse the other team's request. 
>>My colleague doesn't know how to refuse the other team's request.

because of his character
So i often said to him
Don't accept every time and focus on our project.
>>I feel annoyed and mad with his character. I always told him to focus on our project and learn how to say no.
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