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1. If you are doing nothing, you are being idle.
2. I like listening to some rap music.
3. My mother sew my clothes because there were holes on it.
4. My cousin is the heir when his father died.
5. We need air inside the house so it will feel and smell fresh.
6. My father gave me a sent to buy some candies.
7. The fine dust in Korea came for the Gobi dessert in China.
8. My mother went to the market to buy meat.
9. Their pet fish dies so they have to berry it.
10. It was dark last night but I saw the knight coming out of the castle.

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Thank you for being a great student Vicky. ^_^
T. Irene
1. If you are doing nothing, you are being idle.
>>> Correct. 
2. I like listening to some rap music.
>>> Correct. 
3. My mother sew my clothes because there were holes on it.
>>> Correct. 
4. My cousin is the heir when his father died.
>>> Correct. 
5. We need air inside the house so it will feel and smell fresh.
>>> Correct. 
6. My father gave me a sent to buy some candies.
>>> My father gave me a scent to buy some candies.
7. The fine dust in Korea came from the Gobi dessert in China.
>>> The fine dust in Korea came from the Gobi desert in China.
8. My mother went to the market to buy meat.
>>> Correct. 
9. Their pet fish dies so they have to berry it.
>>> Their pet fish dies so they have to bury it.
10. It was dark last night but I saw the knight coming out of the castle.
>>> Correct. 




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