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You is one person who inspires you? Answer in a few sentences.

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If it means I am the one who inspires me, then I will say ¡°no¡± because I¡¯m very insecure. However, some people near me like friends, family and teachers inspire me with their advice whenever I face hardship.

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Hello, Judy!

I'm glad that you were able to interpret my question even if the first word was supposed to be 'who'. Anyway, since you answered in two sentences, it means that you got any of the two meanings. Anyway, a job well done on the two sentences because both of them are correct!

There are people who motivate us to do the things that we can even better because they possess a certain energy that drives them to accomplish things. With this, great job on your homework!

See you soon!

-T. Donna =) 

If it means I am the one who inspires me, then I will say ¡°no¡± because I¡¯m very insecure. 
>> Correct!

However, some people near me like friends, family and teachers inspire me with their advice whenever I face hardship.
>> Correct!
Or: However, some people near me like friends, family, and teachers inspire me with their advice whenever I face hardship.

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