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I agree that this strict policy to ban the ues of disposable items.

The reasons are that the global environment and climate problems are too serious and dangerous for us and the next generation.

We are accustomed to using disposal items after the COVID.

Even I use plastic cups in my office now.

But I think that the people's saying of COVID transmission is excuse.

We are familiar to use disposal items and feel convenient.

Using disposal items has become habits in our daily life.

So we are annoying.

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Happy Friday, Ms. Lily!
i think everyone is at fault here and it become worse amid the pandemic because people enjoy doing some deliveries, who wouldn't right? Well, it's not yet late to go back to the old policy of banning single use plastic to continue saving the environment. Sadly, the pandemic has brought a lot of changes to us and even the environment.
Have a happy weekend! Take care!
Aki~
I agree that this strict policy to ban the ues of disposable items.
>>> I agree that this strict policy bans the use of disposable items.
The reasons are that the global environment and climate problems are too serious and dangerous for us and the next generation.
>>> CORRECT
We are accustomed to using disposal items after the COVID.
>>> We are accustomed to using disposal items after COVID.
>>> We are accustomed to using disposal items after the COVID19.
Even I use plastic cups in my office now.
>>> Even I, use plastic cups in my office now.
>>> I also use plastic cups in my office now.
But I think that the people's saying of COVID transmission is excuse.
>>> But I think that the people's saying of COVID transmission is an excuse
We are familiar to use disposal items and feel convenient.
>>> We are familiar to use disposable items and feel convenient.
Using disposal items has become habits in our daily life.
>>>Using disposal items has become a habit in our daily life.
So we are annoying.
>>> So, we are annoyed
>>> It is annoying
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