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Answer the following questions and explain your answer:

1. Is it easy for you to forgive people who have hurt your feelings? If so, provide an example to prove being a forgiving person?

I think easy for to forgive people who hurt me feelings.
I don't have example to prove in particular.
if when i had trouble with relation of someone, i just had spend time for back to normal.


2. If you are not able to forgive others, you carry the burden on you and hurt yourself. Do you agree?
I disagree.
If i not able to forgive others, i usually cut off contact.

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Hi, Bob! 

Thank you so much for sending me your composition. It means a lot to me. Forgiveness is a big word, and we should learn how to forgive others. We cannot hold the grudge forever, and forgiving someone will make us happy. We don't need to worry about anything, and we can live our lives without having a heavy heart. I also agree with your answer that if we are not able to forgive others, then it is better to ignore them to avoid arguing. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the questions. Keep up the good work. Have a great day! ^^

~T.Erin 

I think easy for to forgive people who hurt me feelings.
>>I think it is easy for me to forgive people who hurt my feelings.

I don't have example to prove in particular.
>>I don't have an example to prove in particular.

if when i had trouble with relation of someone, i just had spend time for back to normal.
>>But, If I have trouble concerning someone, I'll just wait for the time that the situation will get back to normal.

If i not able to forgive others, i usually cut off contact.
>>If I can't forgive others, I usually cut the ties between us.
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