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What was your favorite food as a child?

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When I was at child. I really liked the fast foods like chicken, pizza and hamburger. But as I got older, I couldn't digest well now. So I'm getting further away from them.

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Hi Elic! 

I used to love those too. Actually, I still love them now. HAHAHA! Nothing has changed. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

When I was at child. I really liked the fast foods like chicken, pizza and hamburger. 
>> When I was a child, I really likes eating fast food like fried chicken, pizza and hamburger. 

But as I got older, I couldn't digest well now. 
>> But as I got older, I couldn't digest well so I try to stay further away from those. 

So I'm getting further away from them.
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