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I'm freshman in the university so I have many time than sophomore, junior and senior.
So I watched the latest news are entertainment news and medical news.
The medical news says hangover is too bad but you shouldn't take painkillers.
And the entertainment news says Korean singers famous for K-POP.

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Hi there, Chae Young!

I appreciate your posting your homework. Well done!
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I'm freshman in the university so I have many time than sophomore, junior and senior.
>> I'm a university freshman so I have more free time than the sophomore, junior, and senior students. 

So I watched the latest news are entertainment news and medical news.
>> So I watched the latest news on entertainment and medicine. 

The medical news says hangover is too bad but you shouldn't take painkillers.
>> or: According to the medical news, hangover is terrible but you shouldn't consume painkillers.

And the entertainment news says Korean singers famous for K-POP.
>> And the entertainment news says Korea is famous for K-pop.

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