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I will stay in Canada about 3years. My daughter will go to university and I'll hope come back my country. But my son will go to secondry school. So I don't know when I'll be back in Korea.
Until I stay in Canada When I will study hard English.
When I come back my country, I want to foundation Kid's English Academy with my family.
It is my small dream.

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Hello there again, Ms. Kyu!

This is a very vivid plan for the next three years. I think that your children are very lucky because they have a mother as supportive and hardworking as you. Their education in Canada is going to be successful because they have all the love they can have from you and your husband. Well, you can always go back to your country for a short vacation when you want to. For now, you are building their future.

Thank you for sharing to me this answer. I am sure that you are so busy but you managed to write me a homework. See you soon in class!

-T. Donna =)

I will stay in Canada about 3years. 
Correct!
Or: I will stay in Canada for about 3 years.

My daughter will go to university and I'll hope come back my country. 
>> My daughter will go to the university and I hope to come back to my country. 

But my son will go to secondry school. 
>> Correct!
Or: secondary 
Or: But my son will go to the secondary school. 

So I don't know when I'll be back in Korea.
>> Correct!

Until I stay in Canada When I will study hard English.
>> Until I stay in Canada, I will study English hard.

When I come back my country, I want to foundation Kid's English Academy with my family.
>> When I come back to my country, I want to found a Kid's English Academy with my family.

It is my small dream.
>> Correct!
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