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HOMEWORK:
What is your goal for the next 5 years? Share your answer in a few sentences.

I have many goals for the future dream. The first is to have a lively and stable house that I have always hoped my dream.
The second is to be an enterpriser. I want to create a social enterprise for people and earth and to operate many companies that span people's daily lives.

I can't wait for every Monday because of you. Thank you Donna!

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Good evening, Hae Ju!

I am grateful to know about your dreams and aspirations. It is so important that we have big dreams and be able to achieve them no matter what . A few years ago, I dreamt of having a house. Now that I have one, I dream of another thing. Since you are working so hard for your dreams, as you fulfill being an enterpriser and create a big impact to the world, I wish you all the best. May you use English to help you along the way.

Every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday is so much better with you and Goreum! Thank you for your kind and gentle thoughts always.

See you then!

-T. Donna =)

I have many goals for the future dream. 
>> I have many goals for my future dream. 

The first is to have a lively and stable house that I have always hoped my dream.
>> The first is to have a lively and stable house that I have always (hoped for/ dreamt of).

The second is to be an enterpriser. 
>> Correct!

I want to create a social enterprise for people and earth and to operate many companies that span people's daily lives.
>> Correct!

I can't wait for every Monday because of you. Thank you Donna!
>> Correct! (Awww! My heart skipped a beat.)
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