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How are you going to handle the situation if your companion on a vacation is an adventurous one? (He/She is going against your plan)

I think It's all about the people. Every person have different personality and different traveling style. We should respect others thoughts first.
If my companion is not a person who push his thought or plan too hard, and is a believable person, then I am willing to fllow his lead even that's an adventurous one.
For example, my brother is a kind of person who like to try new things, and when he want me to join his plan, he always persuading me by telling me all the advantages about his plan.

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Great day, Jane!
I would agree on your point, as long as both of you will have fun then one party should follow the other to make your vacation worthwhile.
Keep joining the adventures of life! It's hard to go back once you missed on :)
T. Aki~
I think It's all about the people. Every person have different personality and different traveling style. We should respect others thoughts first.
>>> I think It's all about the people. Every person has a different personality and different traveling styles. We should respect others' thoughts first.
If my companion is not a person who push his thought or plan too hard and is a believable person, then I am willing to fllow his lead even that's an adventurous one.
>>> If my companion is not a person who pushes his thought or plan too hard and is a believable person, then I am willing to follow his lead even if that's an adventurous one.
For example, my brother is a kind of person who like to try new things, and when he want me to join his plan, he always persuading me by telling me all the advantages about his plan.
>>> For example, my brother is the kind of person who likes to try new things, and when he wants me to join his plan, he always persuades me by telling me all the advantages of his plan.
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