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Do you think history repeats itself? Explain your answer.

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People can learn a lot of knowledge from our histories such as handling the problem and national spirit. It can give diverse support to our lives. People don't repeat the same history again although we use similar methods from our ancestors. This is because the current background and the past are significantly different. Nowadays, countries or people access practical studies with the present techniques. For example, ancestors experience a lot of wars, they recorded them for future generations. Through it, all countries have learned wars cause serious damage economically, hence most nations try to avoid wars and keep a good relationships. It can make better circumstances and peaceful countries. Earth is writing a new history for the next generations

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Hello Jin!
Some people say it does repeat itself as noticed with what is happening in the present.  It's not entirely history, but it's actually a circumstance that happens.  People tend to connect it to what happened in the past so they say the situation is repeated.  Well, the world is round.  So it can happen again if people aren't careful.  ^_^

~T. Maine

People can learn a lot of knowledge from our histories such as handling the problem and national spirit.
>>People can learn a lot from histories such as handling the problem and gaining the national spirit.
It can give diverse support to our lives.
>>Correct.
People don't repeat the same history again although we use similar methods from our ancestors.
>>Correct.
This is because the current background and the past are significantly different.
>>Correct.
Nowadays, countries or people access practical studies with the present techniques.
>>Correct.
For example, ancestors experience a lot of wars, they recorded them for future generations.
>>For example, ancestors experienced a lot of wars and they recorded them for future generations.
Through it, all countries have learned wars cause serious damage economically, hence most nations try to avoid wars and keep a good relationships.
>>Through it, all countries have learned wars and caused serious damage economically.  Hence, most nations try to avoid them and make good relationships.
It can make better circumstances and peaceful countries.
>>Correct.
Earth is writing a new history for the next generations
>>Earth is writing a new history for the next generations.

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