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Writing Task (Mar 31th, 2022)

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Do you pay much attention to what you eat? If so, how do you control your diet?
I don't seem to pay much attention. However, there's some things that I keep when eating. First, I try not to eat much white flour and to avoid sugary drinks, chocolates, and candies. And I dislike to eat snacks between meals. Looking back what I just wrote, it seems that I seem to pay a little attention. As I don't want to eat those things, I often tell my wife and my daughter, but my wife like to eat all of those. And, unfortunately, so does my daughter. My wife is always asking me "Why am I getting weight? I don't know why." But it is very clear for her to put on weights. I told the truth."I know why. You wanna know why? If you keeps the track of every thing you eat, you would know the reason instantly" After hearing what I told, she got mad about me for having said the the truth that she might have already known the reason.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, U Seung! 

Thank you for answering the questions and sharing your thoughts about it! 

~T. Roanne ^_^
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I don't seem to pay much attention. 
>> Correct! 
However, there's some things that I keep when eating. 
>> Correct! 
First, I try not to eat much white flour and to avoid sugary drinks, chocolates, and candies. 
>> Correct! 
And I dislike to eat snacks between meals. 
>> Correct! 
Looking back what I just wrote, it seems that I seem to pay a little attention. 
>> Correct! 
As I don't want to eat those things, I often tell my wife and my daughter, but my wife like to eat all of those. 
>> Correct! 
And, unfortunately, so does my daughter. 
>> Correct! 
My wife is always asking me "Why am I getting weight? I don't know why." 
>> My wife is always asking me "Why am I getting weight? I don't know why.". 
But it is very clear for her to put on weights. I told the truth.
>> Correct! 
"I know why. You wanna know why? If you keeps the track of every thing you eat, you would know the reason instantly" 
>> "I know why. You wanna know why? If you keeps the track of everything you eat, you would know the reason instantly" 
After hearing what I told, she got mad about me for having said the the truth that she might have already known the reason
>> After hearing what I said, she got mad about me for having told the truth that she might have already known the reason.
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