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HOMEWORK:
How did you become great at the arts? Share your answer in a few sentences.

When I was in kindergarten. I attended an art kindergarten. the chief teacher told me "You have a color sense". That saying makes me good student of arts. After that, I was class president for arts activity in elementary school and I be enrolled at art high school to gain entrance to arts college.

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Good evening, Hae Ju!

Talent is easily seen when you naturally and spontaneously do well at it and simply enjoy it. In your case, this is true. It is a very good thing that your teacher have seen this at your very young age.

Today, you have the power to influence so many young people to do art just like you or even better. This is your gift so hone it better always and share it to those who love it just like you.

Thank you for this homework answer. See you in class on Friday!

-T. Donna =)

When I was in kindergarten. I attended an art kindergarten. 
>> When I was in kindergarten, I attended an art class.  

the chief teacher told me "You have a color sense". 
>> Correct!
Or: The chief teacher told me, "You have a color sense". 

That saying makes me good student of arts. 
>> That saying made me a good student of arts. 

After that, I was class president for arts activity in elementary school and I be enrolled at art high school to gain entrance to arts college.a
>> After that, I was the class president for the arts activity in elementary school and I enrolled at an art high school to gain entrance to an arts college.
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