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Yes. I collect glass marbles and snow globes. I have been collecting glass beads since I was 7 years old, and snow globes since I was 10 years old. I have collected a lot of glass marbles and not many snow globes.

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Hi, Sheila! Thank you for sharing the things that you collect. I also have the habit of collecting different things, but mine is different. I like to collect stationery. 
I'm happy to see the different colors of my gel pens and different sizes of my notebooks. I'm also excited to see the colorful notepads and sticky notes I have.
I hope I can get to hear your reasons why you like collecting glass marbles and snow globes soon at our next meeting. ^_^

~T.Erin

Yes. I collect glass marbles and snow globes. 
>>CORRECT
I have been collecting glass beads since I was 7 years old, and snow globes since I was 10 years old.
>>I have been collecting glass beads since I was seven years old, and snow globes when I was ten years old.
 I have collected a lot of glass marbles and not many snow globes.
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