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What do you know about Elephants?
I know that elephants have large ears and long nose. And they have some kind of horn called tusks. Many people wanted to get the elephants tusks. So many hunters did poaching. Now the elephant became endangered spices.
Do you like elephants YES or NO and Why?
I don't know. because it is just normal

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Hi Seung Ju,
Elephants are the largest land animals on Earth, and they're one of the most unique-looking animals, too. With their characteristic long noses, or trunks; large, floppy ears; and wide, thick legs, there is no other animal with a similar physique. And elephants are herbivores: they eat a range of plants, including grasses, fruit, and roots. ~ Teacher QUENNY.
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What do you know about Elephants?
>> What do you know about Elephants?(CORRECT)
I know that elephants have large ears and long nose. 
>> I know that elephants have large ears and long noses. 
>>And they have some kind of horn called tusks. 
>>And they have some kind of horn called tusks. (CORRECT)
Many people wanted to get the elephants tusks. 
>> Many people wanted to get the elephant's tusks. 
So many hunters did poaching. Now the elephant became endangered spices.
>> So many hunters did poaching and now the elephants became endangered species.
Do you like elephants YES or NO and Why?
>> Do you like elephants YES or NO and Why? (CORRECT) 
I don't know. because it is just normal
>> I like elephants but not very much and I don't know because it is just normal.
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What do you know about Elephants?
I know that elephants have large ears and long nose. And they have some kind of horn called tusks. Many people wanted to get the elephants tusks. So many hunters did poaching. Now the elephant became endangered spices.
Do you like elephants YES or NO and Why?
I don't know. because it is just normal
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