¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What is something that people often get pressured into doing?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*ÀÎ
2022-03-30 371

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

People can feel happy emotion in our daily lives but there are also diverse works that make get forced. It is unhealthy for people and can cause them to break relationships. In my opinion, humans get it a lot with their job and friends.
First, there are many departments in the company, and if I belong to one of the groups, I should follow their rules and opinions rather than my real mind. This is because when some person decides another decision compared with them, he or she may become a tactless person. Then, it makes their individual is stubborn. Overall, people should make their image good in the workplace. That is why people get pressure. Second of all, friendship makes an invisible pressure as well. People prefer to organize groups that have similar opinions, interests, or families. However, if there are more than 2 persons, a tacit force can be made. If some people don't want to follow or argue with that, the friendship will easily break. Hence, many people are scared it.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi there, Jin!
Thanks for you opinion.  Keep on sharing your thoughts and learn from what you are reading.  Have a nice day ahead! :)


~T. Maine

People can feel happy emotion in our daily lives but there are also diverse works that make get forced.
>>People can feel happy in their daily lives, but there are also diverse tasks that may need some effort.
It is unhealthy for people and can cause them to break relationships.
>>Correct.
In my opinion, humans get it a lot with their job and friends.
>>Correct. 
First, there are many departments in the company, and if I belong to one of the groups, I should follow their rules and opinions rather than my real mind.
>>First, there are various departments in the company.  If I belong to one of those groups, I should follow their rules and regulations instead of my free will.
This is because when some person decides another decision compared with them, he or she may become a tactless person.
>>This is because when a person decides differently among the majority, he might be considered tactless.
Then, it makes their individual is stubborn.
>>Then, it makes the individual stubborn.
Overall, people should make their image good in the workplace.
>>Overall, people should make a good image in the workplace.
That is why people get pressure.
>>Correct.
Second of all, friendship makes an invisible pressure as well.
>>Correct.
People prefer to organize groups that have similar opinions, interests, or families.
>>Correct.
However, if there are more than 2 persons, a tacit force can be made.
>>However, if there are more than 2 people, a tacit force can be made.
 If some people don't want to follow or argue with that, the friendship will easily break.
>>Correct.
Hence, many people are scared it.
>>Hence, many people are scared of it.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
118429 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 1
118428 part1-2 ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 209
118427 part1-2 ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 162
118426 What kind of challenge would analytics department and Bloomberg... ¹®*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 186
118425 Describe your understanding and motivation on the role of an... ¹®*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 144
118424 3rd assignment À±*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 235
118423 What do you think should we do before job interviews? ¹Ú*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 213
118422 Howework Á¤*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 190
118421 202.4.21 Àü* ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 213
118420 What sports can you play? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 263
118419 What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 0
118418 What do you think should we do before job interviews? ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2022-04-22 212
118417 Are you good at memorizing? Answer in a few sentences. ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-21 250
118416 What is your idea of the best travel experience? ±è*Áö ¿Ï·á 2022-04-21 226
118415 4/21 homework ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-21 187
118414 Handwriting and personality. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-04-21 152
118413 HOMEWORK ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-04-21 1
118412 I like BTS ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-21 4
118411 homework ÀÌ*¾Ö ¿Ï·á 2022-04-21 1
118410 Homework ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-21 220

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04