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I think the traffic is good in my town. The traffic jam in my neighborhood is not that bad, but the road to city is pushed. Thanks to the traffics, we can go anywhere we want regardless of time or space, but because of that traffic jams occur and we have complexity, inconvenience.

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I think the traffic is good in my town. 
>> Correct.
OR:
>> I think the traffic condition is good in my town. 
The traffic jam in my neighborhood is not that bad, but the road to city is pushed. 
>> The traffic jam in my neighborhood is not that bad, but the road to the city is pushed. 
Thanks to the traffics, we can go anywhere we want regardless of time or space, but because of that traffic jams occur and we have complexity, inconvenience.
>> Thanks to the traffic, we can go anywhere we want regardless of time or space, but because traffic jams occur we experience complexity and inconvenience.
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