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What kind of future do you hope to have?

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I hope to have a future where robots help people do house chores. And many technologies will replace people's routines that people can work less than they used to do in the past. With spare time, people can spend time together that they can know each other and get along with each other more.

For energy, solar energy will be replaced by current power plants that we won't worry about energy problems. Through this endless energy, we also can resolve many issues we come up against, such as water or air pollution, and resource problems.
We can go everywhere we want through solar energy free of charge. We don't need to worry about pollution brought about by vehicles because all vehicles are powered by electricity.

With the development of biotechnology, food will become abundant and almost all diseases will become curable. The more the supply, the lower the price naturally. People can buy anything at a reasonable price. The more time people will have, the happier they will become.

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Hi, Steve! 

That would be a wonderful future to hope for. 
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about it! 

~T. Roanne ^_^
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I hope to have a future where robots help people do house chores. 
>> Correct! 
And many technologies will replace people's routines that people can work less than they used to do in the past. 
>> Correct! 
With spare time, people can spend time together that they can know each other and get along with each other more.
>> Correct! 

For energy, solar energy will be replaced by current power plants that we won't worry about energy problems. 
>> Correct! 
Through this endless energy, we also can resolve many issues we come up against, such as water or air pollution, and resource problems.
>> Correct! 
We can go everywhere we want through solar energy free of charge. 
>> Correct! 
We don't need to worry about pollution brought about by vehicles because all vehicles are powered by electricity.
>> Correct! 

With the development of biotechnology, food will become abundant and almost all diseases will become curable. 
>> Correct! 
The more the supply, the lower the price naturally. 
>> Correct! 
People can buy anything at a reasonable price. 
>> Correct! 
The more time people will have, the happier they will become.
>> Correct! 

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