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If you can learn another language, what would it be and why?

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If I can learn another language, I want to learn Spanish language.
Nowadays, a lot of countries are using Spanish language.
And also it will be very easy to learn other Europe languages if I learn Spanish language.
Also I can read a lot of books about history.
In the past, in Europe, a lot of countries used Spanish language.
Also Rome used Latin language, that are based on Spanish language.
So I think it will be very useful to learn Spanish language.

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Hi John! 

Spanish is actually a great language to learn. It is being used in many countries. It is also the second language that most Americans study. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

If I can learn another language, I want to learn Spanish language.
>> 
If I can learn another language, I want to learn Spanish. 

Nowadays, a lot of countries are using Spanish language.
>> Nowadays, a lot of countries are using Spanish. 

And also it will be very easy to learn other Europe languages if I learn Spanish language.
>> It will also be very easy for me to learn other European languages if I learn how to speak in Spanish first. 

Also I can read a lot of books about history.
>> Also, I can read a lot of books about history. 

In the past, in Europe, a lot of countries used Spanish language.
>> In the past, in European and other countries used Spanish. 

Also Rome used Latin language, that are based on Spanish language.
>> They also used Latin in Rome. 

So I think it will be very useful to learn Spanish language.
>> This is why I think it is very useful to learn how to speak in Spanish. 
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