¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ÀÌ*ÁÖ
2022-03-21 632

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

HOMEWORK:
What should the Korean government do to encourage people to have more children? Share your answer in a few sentences.

It has been a long problem for newly married couple to find a house. Food, clothing, and shelter are the most basic things that people need to live. However, the government has not provided adequate places. fist of all, they should have to solve the real estate issue to encourage people to have more children.

I worried about your allergic symptoms. Have a healthy day too Donna. Thank you

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello, Hae Ju!

Housing problem is really one of the toughest problems to deal with specially to couples starting a life together. This may be your problem soon too. So, we hope that president elect Yoon will make policies to solve this pressing problem. Anyway, looking at your sentences below, you made all correct ones. So congratulations to a well done homework!

I am having colds right now but I will be fine when I see you next time. So stay safe and healthy!

Have a great afternoon!

-T. Donna =)

It has been a long problem for newly married couple to find a house. 
>> Correct!
Or: It has been a long problem for a newly married couple to find a house. 

Food, clothing, and shelter are the most basic things that people need to live. 
>> Correct!

However, the government has not provided adequate places. 
>> Correct!

fist of all, they should have to solve the real estate issue to encourage people to have more children.
>> Correct!
Or: First of all, they should have to solve the real estate issue to encourage people to have more children.

I worried about your allergic symptoms. Have a healthy day too Donna. Thank you
>> I'm worried about your allergic symptoms. Have a healthy day too Donna. Thank you.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
117430 Do you prefer reading, listening, speaking, or writing lessons?... Àü*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 524
117429 What are your weaknesses? Explain in detail. Ȳ*º° ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 250
117428 Do you prefer spending time with family or friends? ¼Û*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 1233
117427 What is the most interesting hobby in your family? ½Å*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 644
117426 Writing Task(Mar 15th, 2022) ³²*½Â ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 412
117425 Use each expression in a sentence ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 902
117424 Who is your favorite book character? ¼Û*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 974
117423 Thank you! Donna! °­*ÀÌ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 654
117422 Good evening! °­*ÀÌ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 725
117421 Because of this situation ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 874
117420 My Homeowrk °­*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 458
117419 Brushing ½Å*ÈÄ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 10
117418 Mama\'s boy ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 1
117417 homework ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 187
117416 Favorite book character ¼Û*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 613
117415 How do you see yourself 10 years from now? ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 169
117414 What do you do to avoid catching COVID-19? ¿À*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 405
117413 Wednesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ÁøÇàÁß 2022-03-16 454
117412 About computers controlling the house. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 173
117411 Losting My Dream Lense ÃÖ*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-03-16 147

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04