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Do you have a different attitude to English homework now than you did when you were younger? Explain

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Yes, I do. I have a big difference compared with when I was young. Since I was a teenager, I didn't want to memorize words and solve workbooks. I think I didn't know how to import that is, and I will go to the University in the USA. So I didn't study hard and have interesting in the subject. However, the current situation is really important for me. I choose to go abroad, so English is one of my requirements to me. I need to study hard for the official test. Also, I have to learn how to essays and take a test. I can't disobey this because I can't remain a good score if I don't study hard. In addition. I know homework is an important point in studying. I can improve my skills and seize on the knowledge. However, I still hate school assignments, such as essays and quizzes. It is so boring and I'm always worried about what score the professor gives to me. I still don't like homework, but I know it is one of the essential things in studying. It's helpful work in my life.

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There seems to be a correction with your homework for this one.  You might have answered or sent the same answers for the same question.  Kindly check your homework question on the website for the correct one.  Thanks. ^^


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Yes, I do.
>>Correct.
I have a big difference compared with when I was young.
>>It's a big difference compared when I was young.
Since I was a teenager, I didn't want to memorize words and solve workbooks.
>>Correct.
I think I didn't know how to import that is, and I will go to the University in the USA.
>>I think I didn't know how important that was and I would go to the university in the USA.
So I didn't study hard and have interesting in the subject.
>>So I didn't study hard and lost interest in the subject.
However, the current situation is really important for me.
>>Correct.
I choose to go abroad, so English is one of my requirements to me.
>>I choose to go abroad because English is one of my requirements.
I need to study hard for the official test.
>>Correct.
Also, I have to learn how to essays and take a test.
>>Also, I have to learn how to write essays and pass the test.
I can't disobey this because I can't remain a good score if I don't study hard.
>>I can't disobey this because I can't maintain having a good score if I don't study hard.
In addition. I know homework is an important point in studying.
>>In addition, I know homework is important in studying.
I can improve my skills and seize on the knowledge.
>>I can improve my skills and seize on the knowledge I have learned at school.
However, I still hate school assignments, such as essays and quizzes.
>>Correct.
It is so boring and I'm always worried about what score the professor gives to me.
>>It is so boring and I'm always worried about the score my professor gives me.
I still don't like homework, but I know it is one of the essential things in studying.
>>Correct.
 It's helpful work in my life.
>>It's quite helpful in my life.

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