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Do you have a different attitude to English homework now than you did when you were younger? Explain

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Yes, I do. I have a big difference compared with when I was young. Since I was a teenager, I didn't want to memorize words and solve workbooks. I think I didn't know how to import that is, and I will go to the University in the USA. So I didn't study hard and have interesting in the subject. However, the current situation is really important for me. I choose to go abroad, so English is one of my requirements to me. I need to study hard for the official test. Also, I have to learn how to essays and take a test. I can't disobey this because I can't remain a good score if I don't study hard. In addition. I know homework is an important point in studying. I can improve my skills and seize on the knowledge. However, I still hate school assignments, such as essays and quizzes. It is so boring and I'm always worried about what score the professor gives to me. I still don't like homework, but I know it is one of the essential things in studying. It's helpful work in my life.

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Yes, I do.
>>Correct.
I have a big difference compared with when I was young.
>>It's a big difference compared when I was young.
Since I was a teenager, I didn't want to memorize words and solve workbooks.
>>Correct.
I think I didn't know how to import that is, and I will go to the University in the USA.
>>I think I didn't know how important that was and I would go to the university in the USA.
So I didn't study hard and have interesting in the subject.
>>So I didn't study hard and lost interest in the subject.
However, the current situation is really important for me.
>>Correct.
I choose to go abroad, so English is one of my requirements to me.
>>I choose to go abroad because English is one of my requirements.
I need to study hard for the official test.
>>Correct.
Also, I have to learn how to essays and take a test.
>>Also, I have to learn how to write essays and pass the test.
I can't disobey this because I can't remain a good score if I don't study hard.
>>I can't disobey this because I can't maintain having a good score if I don't study hard.
In addition. I know homework is an important point in studying.
>>In addition, I know homework is important in studying.
I can improve my skills and seize on the knowledge.
>>I can improve my skills and seize on the knowledge I have learned at school.
However, I still hate school assignments, such as essays and quizzes.
>>Correct.
It is so boring and I'm always worried about what score the professor gives to me.
>>It is so boring and I'm always worried about the score my professor gives me.
I still don't like homework, but I know it is one of the essential things in studying.
>>Correct.
 It's helpful work in my life.
>>It's quite helpful in my life.

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