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High Hopes

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'Hogh Hopes' of 'panic!at the disco'is quite hopeful song, but also very sober. It says about harsh dreamer who doesn't have any power yet, but would be successful with one's hopes.
I really hope I could start challenges in my life and do something what I would do after five yers later.
Although I have some high hopes, I hope I can have higher hopes than now.

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Hello Justine!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


'Hogh Hopes' of 'panic!at the disco'is quite hopeful song, but also very sober. 

>> 'High Hopes' of 'Panic at the Disco' is quite a hopeful song, but also very sober. 

It says about harsh dreamer who doesn't have any power yet, but would be successful with one's hopes.

>> It tells about a harsh dreamer who doesn't have any power yet, but would be successful with one's hopes.
I really hope I could start challenges in my life and do something what I would do after five yers later.

>> I really hope I could start challenges in my life and do something that I would still be doing after five years.
Although I have some high hopes, I hope I can have higher hopes than now.

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