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I feel like exciting. Learning new things gives me great pleasure.

Learning a new language is fun, kind of English, spanish, china, Japanese but I need to speak English. The reason why I want to go to Canada. I have a dream. I've been studying to teach the English education for early children next year

but it also makes it difficult to speak English. such like grammar or speak long sentences. I often feel frustrated when I can't explain because I can't think of the word. I try to overcome this.

Firstly, I memorized 10 words a day.

Secondly, I share a message with a foreign friend in English.

Lastly, I study Alphabet Panics. This is helpful for speaking and listening.

In conclusion, learning English is a big challenge for me and makes me know of the world.

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Hi, Hailey! 
Thank you for answering this homework.^^Always remember to use capitalize the first letter if the word is a noun, such as the types of languages (Chinese). Learning English can be really difficult. However, with practice, it can be done. It will take time and great effort but it sure is worth it. Just keep going!^^
~Elica~

I feel like exciting. 
>>I feel excited.
OR
>>It feels exciting. 

Learning new things gives me great pleasure.
>>CORRECT

Learning a new language is fun, 
>>Learning a new language is fun. 

kind of English, spanish, china, Japanese but I need to speak English. 
>>Languages like English, Spanish, Chinese and Japanese but I need to learn speaking English more. 

The reason why I want to go to Canada. I have a dream.
>>The reason why I want to go to Canada is my dream. 
I've been studying to teach the English education for early children next year
>>I have been studying English to teach English Education for Early Childhood next year. 

but it also makes it difficult to speak English. 
>>However, it is also difficult to speak in English. 
such like grammar or speak long sentences.
>>Especially grammar and constructing long sentences. 
I often feel frustrated when I can't explain because I can't think of the word. 
>>CORRECT
I try to overcome this.
>>CORRECT

Firstly, I memorized 10 words a day.
>>Firstly, I memorize 10 words a day.

Secondly, I share a message with a foreign friend in English.
>>CORRECT

Lastly, I study Alphabet Panics. 
>>Lastly, I study the alphabet and phonics.
This is helpful for speaking and listening.
>>These are helpful for speaking and listening.

In conclusion, learning English is a big challenge for me and makes me know of the world.
>>In conclusion, learning English is a big challenge for me and it makes me know of the world more.
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