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What do you do to avoid catching COVID-19?

작성자: 황*하
2022-03-12 899

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I heard that hand hygiene is the first thing we have to practice to protect us from viruses. It is not easy to wash hands frequently because it cause dry hands. Although, it has a few disadvantages, people must follow it strictly. Secondly, it is known that wearing face mask can protect us from airborne infectious disease. It has already became normal for us to wear mask anytime. I sometimes forgot to wear it while I was going to work. At the beginning of pandemic, nobody cared if someone wear a mask or not but they have became sensitive if someone didn't wear a mask because he/she might be the one who has already been infected. It is quite simple to protect us from the contagious disease but it can be annoyed. I believe that we will overcome it soon and we will be stronger than we used to be.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

I heard that hand hygiene is the first thing we have to practice to protect us from viruses. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I heard that proper hand washing is the first thing we have to practice to protect us from viruses. 
It is not easy to wash hands frequently because it cause dry hands. 
>> It is not easy to wash hands frequently because it cause our hands to be dry. 
Although, it has a few disadvantages, people must follow it strictly. 
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Although, it has a few disadvantages, people must strictly follow. 
Secondly, it is known that wearing face mask can protect us from airborne infectious disease. 
>> CORRECT!
It has already became normal for us to wear mask anytime. 
>> It has already became normal for us to wear masks anytime. 
OR >> It has already became normal for us to wear a mask anytime. 
I sometimes forgot to wear it while I was going to work. 
>> I sometimes forget to wear it while I am on my way to work. 
At the beginning of pandemic, nobody cared if someone wear a mask or not but they have became sensitive if someone didn't wear a mask because he/she might be the one who has already been infected. 
>> At the beginning of the pandemic, nobody cared if someone wears a mask or not but they have became sensitive if someone didn't wear a mask because he/she might be the one who has already been infected. 
It is quite simple to protect us from the contagious disease but it can be annoyed. 
>> It is quite simple to protect us from the contagious diseases but it can be annoying. 
I believe that we will overcome it soon and we will be stronger than we used to be.
>> CORRECT!
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