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Tough cookie

작성자: 황*구
2022-03-11 1094

회원님의 영작문

Hi! Andrea!
I always apreciate you.

During our today's class we talked about tough cookie!
You asked me what the title of the son is.
But I misunderstood that the title meant like a subject.

The title is "tough cookie" by Zico
And after class I also looked it up on youtube.
But it's not almost in English. It's almost in Korean. You know sometimes rap song even in Korean sounds like another language.
Even though it's almost in Korean but I can't hear what they are saying. Whenever I listen to some pop songs that are good and easy to learn English (as some say) I feel bad because I Absolutely don't get it yet. But now it's okay since I can't hear even some Korean musics.
I'm not wierd. They are wierd. :)

Thank you for reading my homework.
See you tomorrow ^^

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Q!^^ 

I listened to the song Tough Cookie. 
It was so different form the Korean songs that I actually listen to. 
Most of the time, I listen to BTS and Blackpinks songs. 

The concept and the context of Tough Cookie is actually extreme for me. 
Honestly, I didn't finish the song ( I am sorry). :) 
I was never a fan of hip hop music.

Andrea

During our today's class we talked about tough cookie!
>> During our class earlier, we've talked about "Tough Cookie". 

You asked me what the title of the son is.
>> You asked me the title of the song. 

But I misunderstood that the title meant like a subject.
>> I misunderstood that, I thought title means subject.

The title is "tough cookie" by Zico
>> The title is "Tough Cookie" by Zico. 

And after class I also looked it up on youtube.
>> Right after class, I also looked it up om YouTube. 

But it's not almost in English. 
It's almost in Korean. 
>> Most of the lines are in Korean, not English.
 
You know sometimes rap song even in Korean sounds like another language.
>> You know sometimes a rap song that is in Korean sounds like another language.

Even though it's almost in Korean but I can't hear what they are saying. 
>> Even though most of it is in Korean, the lyrics are not clear. 

Whenever I listen to some pop songs that are good and easy to learn English (as some say) I feel bad because I Absolutely don't get it yet. 
>>  Whenever I listen to some English pop songs that are good and easy to learn, as some say, I feel bad because I absolutely don't get it. 

But now it's okay since I can't hear even some Korean musics.
>> But now it's okay since I can't even understand some Korean music

I'm not wierd. They are wierd. :)
>> I am not weird, they are. :) 
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