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This election is very difficult to Korean.
I don't like every candidate for president.
It's not only to me all of Korean feel so same.
And the president was elected this morning.
I think it's a disaster.
I am especialy don't like candidate number 2.
But he is new Korea president.

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Hi Ann!
 
Everyone in South Korea actually has mixed emotions about this. Let's just hope that everything will run smoothly during his term. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

This election is very difficult to Korean.
>> This election is very difficult to all Koreans.

I don't like every candidate for president.
>> I don't like all of the candidates for presidency. 

It's not only to me all of Korean feel so same.
>> All Koreans feel the same way. 

And the president was elected this morning.
>> The new president was announced this morning. 

I think it's a disaster.
>> CORRECT

I am especialy don't like candidate number 2.
>> I don't like candidate number 2 especially. 

But he is new Korea president.
>> But I can't do anything since he is the new president of South Korea. 
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