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If you could be an animal, what would you be? Answer in a few sentences.

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I want to be a shark because it is the top predator of food chain, so it has less risk to be eaten by other animals.

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Hello, Judy!

Good choice! However, not all sharks are harmful. There are those that don't bite too. So, like the shark, stay sharp and quick in the things you need to do!

Thank you for this very good sentence. The suggestions I made are only some insertion of the word "the" and some subject-verb agreement pattern.

Still, get well soon and see you on Friday! Take care.

-Donna =)

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