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How did you and your husband meet? Was it love at first sight?

작성자: 서*영
2022-03-08 884

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I hadn’t known him but he had know me a little while we had been going to a same church. But his family decided to go out to the America when he was in highschool. We never chance to meet for a few years. When I became old enough to get married, a person who have been going to the same church introduced me to my husband. Sometimes he says to me that he wsa very happy at that time. But I didn’t like more than him. I just wanted to get married because of my hard situation so I wanted to get out of my terrible times. I felt he was a kind person like other people thinking. So we decided to get married. Conclusionally, we didn’t fall in love at first sight.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello there Eun Yeong!
Reading your homework makes me feel a romantic excitement until I read the part that you married him because of the hard situation. we can talk about that later if your feel comfortable.
Thank you for sharing :)
Aki~
I hadn’t known him but he had know me a little while we had been going to a same church.
>>> I hadn’t known him but he had known me a little while we had been going to the same church.
But his family decided to go out to the America when he was in highschool. 
>>> But his family decided to go out to America when he was in high school. 
We never chance to meet for a few years. 
>>> Correct!
When I became old enough to get married, a person who have been going to the same church introduced me to my husband. 
>>>  When I became old enough to get married, a person who has been going to the same church introduced me to my husband. 
Sometimes he says to me that he was very happy at that time. But I didn’t like more than him. 
>>> Sometimes he says to me that he was very happy at that time. But I didn’t like him.
I just wanted to get married because of my hard situation so I wanted to get out of my terrible times. 
>>> Correct!
I felt he was a kind person like other people thinking. 
>>>  I felt that he was a kind person like others think.
So we decided to get married. 
>>> Correct!
In conclusion we didn’t fall in love at first sight.
>>> Correct!
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