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How did you and your husband meet? Was it love at first sight?

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I hadn¡¯t known him but he had know me a little while we had been going to a same church. But his family decided to go out to the America when he was in highschool. We never chance to meet for a few years. When I became old enough to get married, a person who have been going to the same church introduced me to my husband. Sometimes he says to me that he wsa very happy at that time. But I didn¡¯t like more than him. I just wanted to get married because of my hard situation so I wanted to get out of my terrible times. I felt he was a kind person like other people thinking. So we decided to get married. Conclusionally, we didn¡¯t fall in love at first sight.

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Hello there Eun Yeong!
Reading your homework makes me feel a romantic excitement until I read the part that you married him because of the hard situation. we can talk about that later if your feel comfortable.
Thank you for sharing :)
Aki~
I hadn¡¯t known him but he had know me a little while we had been going to a same church.
>>> I hadn¡¯t known him but he had known me a little while we had been going to the same church.
But his family decided to go out to the America when he was in highschool. 
>>> But his family decided to go out to America when he was in high school. 
We never chance to meet for a few years. 
>>> Correct!
When I became old enough to get married, a person who have been going to the same church introduced me to my husband. 
>>>  When I became old enough to get married, a person who has been going to the same church introduced me to my husband. 
Sometimes he says to me that he was very happy at that time. But I didn¡¯t like more than him. 
>>> Sometimes he says to me that he was very happy at that time. But I didn¡¯t like him.
I just wanted to get married because of my hard situation so I wanted to get out of my terrible times. 
>>> Correct!
I felt he was a kind person like other people thinking. 
>>>  I felt that he was a kind person like others think.
So we decided to get married. 
>>> Correct!
In conclusion we didn¡¯t fall in love at first sight.
>>> Correct!
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