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Why do you think smoking/cigarettes has not been made illegal despite it being harmful to health?

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It was difficult for me to comprehend why many people justify cigarette consumption from the regulatory perspective. I believe smoking could be illegal from the following view. First, it is less detrimental to health than other means. Both drugs and smoking have the same level of addiction. Also, if people consume too much nicotine in the long term, many experts say they could be exposed to cognitive function problems. However, research from many institutes indicates that people are much more exposed to such challenges when consuming the drug. Therefore, smoking could be a less severe form. Secondly, it could come from its¡¯ popularity and prominent figure. People have been smoking long-term, and consuming tobacco has been portrayed as chic in many media. Also, many organizations for a cigarette are ready for lobbying by emphasizing their innovative technology. These reasons make smoking illegal even with negative health implications.

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Thank you for this Aciel!

It was difficult for me to comprehend why many people justify cigarette consumption from the regulatory perspective. 
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I believe smoking could be illegal from the following view. 
>>> OR: I believe smoking could be illegal based on these following perspectives.   
First, it is less detrimental to health than other means. 
>>>  correct   
Both drugs and smoking have the same level of addiction. 
>>>   correct 
Also, if people consume too much nicotine in the long term, many experts say they could be exposed to cognitive function problems. 
>>>  correct  
However, research from many institutes indicates that people are much more exposed to such challenges when consuming the drug. 
>>>  correct   
Therefore, smoking could be a less severe form. 
>>> correct    
Secondly, it could come from its¡¯ popularity and prominent figure. 
>>>  correct  
People have been smoking long-term, and consuming tobacco has been portrayed as chic in many media. 
>>>  correct  
Also, many organizations for a cigarette are ready for lobbying by emphasizing their innovative technology. 
>>>  correct  
These reasons make smoking illegal even with negative health implications.
>>>  correct  


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