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Do you ever worry about losing your friends?

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2022-02-27 386

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I thought the relationship with my friends would keep forever when I was a teenager because we didn't care economical status, occupation and academic background. As getting old, most people lose their old friends due to various reasons and meet new friends. There are a lot of events in people's lives such as wedding, having babies and getting a job. Some friends of mine didn't want to hang out if they didn't get a job because they worried of how their friends thought about them. I would like to be a friend with someone who has same interests with me. If people have different interests, it is really difficult to have a conversation for a long time because there aren't many subjects that we talk about. It is ok to have few friends for me, if we understand fully each other. How many friends I have isn't important, but if I have a soulmate, I would have a relationship with them forever. Since SNS were launched, people want to make friends as many as possible.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Hwang!^^ 

People change as they say. 
As we get older, our priorities, careers and things we like change. 
I don't actually have a lot of friends so I treasure them. 

Losing people on the way is okay. 
They will always be part of our lives. 
And, we, became parts of their lives too. 

Andrea 

I thought the relationship with my friends would keep forever when I was a teenager because we didn't care economical status, occupation and academic background.
>> I thought the relationship between me and my friends would last forever when I was a teenage because we didn't care about the economical status, occupation and academic background. 

As getting old, most people lose their old friends due to various reasons and meet new friends. 
>> As we get old, most people lose their old friends due to various reasons and meet new friends. 

There are a lot of events in people's lives such as wedding, having babies and getting a job.
>> Correct 

Some friends of mine didn't want to hang out if they didn't get a job because they worried of how their friends thought about them. 
>> Some friends of mine didn't want to hang out if they didn't get a job because they are worried of how their friends prejudices.

I would like to be a friend with someone who has same interests with me.
>> Correct 

If people have different interests, it is really difficult to have a conversation for a long time because there aren't many subjects that we talk about. 
>> Correct 

It is ok to have few friends for me, if we understand fully each other. 
>> It is okay to have few friends for me as long as we fully understand each other. 

How many friends I have isn't important, but if I have a soulmate, I would have a relationship with them forever. 
>> The number of my friends is not important, but if I have soulmates, I would have a relationship with them forever. 

Since SNS were launched, people want to make friends as many as possible.
>> Correct 
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