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Which one do you think is better, living in a country that has 2 seasons or 4 seasons?

Our country has 4 seasons.
I think that it is better to have 4 seasons.
Because I can experience 4 seasons.
If I could experience 2 seasons, one season would be too long.
I love to experience a beautiful 4 seasons every year.

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Hi Monica:)

Yes, I envy your country. You can do various activities every season. I wish we can experience that too!. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

Our country has 4 seasons.
>> CORRECT

I think that it is better to have 4 seasons.
>> CORRECT

Because I can experience 4 seasons.
>> It is because I can experience 4 seasons. 

If I could experience 2 seasons, one season would be too long.
>> If I live in a country that only has 2 seasons, each season would be too long. 

I love to experience a beautiful 4 seasons every year.
>> I love experiencing 4 beautiful seasons every year. 
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