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The things that have fruit smells

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Hi Andrea!

I can feel my english skill is getting better day by day. (If you don't think so, sorry.)

It's all thanks to you.

I don't like things that have any smells.
So I use a hand cream that doesn't have any smell. Body wash, toner, emulsion as well.

Things that have smell makes me dizzy.
Sometimes people who used something like perfume too much come to my restaurant. I hate it. I really want them to eat and go out as soon as possible.

I didn't even like when my ex-girl friend did it.
Ah, that's not the reason we broke up.
Don't get me wrong. I'm not that person.

I mean I don't hate every smells.
Some smells make me feel good
But some it's not. Especially when it's too much.

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Hi Q!^^ 

I totally agree that your English skill is getting better! 
I AMS SO PROUD OF YOU. 
You are now more comfortable using the language. :) 
Regarding the fruity smell, I sued to have a hand cream which is from Korea. 
It was given to me by my cousin who went there. 
I really loved it and the product was really good. 

It's sad that you don't like any scent. 
I always want to smell good so I put on body sprays, though not too much. 
I also don't like scents that are too strong. 
I like powdery scent and fruity scents but not vanilla scent. :)
 
Andrea

I can feel my english skill is getting better day by day. (If you don't think so, sorry.)
>> I can feel that my English skill is gettin g better day by day. ( If you don't agree, I apologize. ) 

It's all thanks to you.
>> It's all because of you. 
>> Thanks to you. 

I don't like things that have any smells.
>> Correct 

So I use a hand cream that doesn't have any smell. Body wash, toner, emulsion as well.
>> Correct 

Things that have smell makes me dizzy.
>> Things that have smell make me dizzy. 

Sometimes people who used something like perfume too much come to my restaurant. 
>> Sometimes people who use too much perfume come to my restaurant. 

I hate it. 
>> Correct 

I really want them to eat and go out as soon as possible.
>> Correct 

I didn't even like when my ex-girl friend did it.
>> I didn't even want the smell of my ex-girlfriend. 

Ah, that's not the reason we broke up.
>> By the way, that's not the reason why we broke up. 

Don't get me wrong. 
>> Correct 

I'm not that person.
>> Correct ( Don't worry, I am not judging you.) 

I mean I don't hate every smells.
>> I mean, I don't hate every smell. 

Some smells make me feel good. 
But some it's not.
>> Some scents make me feel good but some don't

 Especially when it's too much.
>> Correct 
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