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Yes I think so. My thinking and a lot of thing ate same with my mom. About being a producer is also the same.

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Hello, David! Thank you for answering your homework. Always check your homework on your student page every after class. It will also help you to practice your English writing skills.
Always do your best, and never stop learning.
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Yes, I think so.
>>correct
My thinking and a lot of thing ate same with my mom.
>>The way I think and the foods that we like it's all the same as my mom.
About being a producer is also the same.
>>We also have the same dream for myself to be a music producer someday.
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