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Yes I think so. My thinking and a lot of thing ate same with my mom. About being a producer is also the same.

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Yes, I think so.
>>correct
My thinking and a lot of thing ate same with my mom.
>>The way I think and the foods that we like it's all the same as my mom.
About being a producer is also the same.
>>We also have the same dream for myself to be a music producer someday.
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