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Could you compare yourself to a thing? What is it? and Why?

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I can compare me at the giraffe. Because I was always tallest in the class since I was young so my nickname was a giraffe. And the giraffe's one of the characteristics there has slow walk, my walking is slow too so I can compare with a giraffe. One more animal that I can compare me to is a hippo. Hippo is really big so they drink a lot of water, I also drink water much nearly 2~3 liter in one day. So I thought I can compare hippo at me.

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Hi Risa,
Comparisons are a normal part of human cognition and can be good for the self-improvement process. When we compare ourselves to others, we get information about what we want and where we want to be, and we get valuable feedback on how we measure up. However, they can also cause us a lot of psychological pain. ~ Teacher QUENNY

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I can compare me at the giraffe. Because I was always tallest in the class since I was young so my nickname was a giraffe. 
>>  I can compare myself to a giraffe because I've always been tallest in the class since I was young so my nickname was a giraffe. 
And the giraffe's one of the characteristics there has slow walk, my walking is slow too so I can compare with a giraffe.
>> And one of the characteristics of the giraffe is slow to walk, I also walk slowly so I can compare myself to a giraffe. 
 One more animal that I can compare me to is a hippo. 
>> One more animal that I can compare myself to is a whale. 
Hippo is really big so they drink a lot of water, I also drink water much nearly 2~3 liter in one day. So I thought I can compare hippo at me.
>> The whale is really big so they drink a lot of water, I also drink a lot of water every day like 2~3 liters in one day. So I think I can compare myself to a whale. 

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I can compare me at the giraffe. Because I was always tallest in the class since I was young so my nickname was a giraffe. And the giraffe's one of the characteristics there has slow walk, my walking is slow too so I can compare with a giraffe. One more animal that I can compare me to is a hippo. Hippo is really big so they drink a lot of water, I also drink water much nearly 2~3 liter in one day. So I thought I can compare hippo at me.
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